Question

14．春節(jié)就要到了，你準(zhǔn)備做什么呢？說(shuō)說(shuō)你的計(jì)劃和安排．請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇80 字左右的短文．短文必須包括所提示的內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
提示：the Spring Festival    Where are you going？How are you going there？
Who are you going there？How long are you staying there？What are you doing there？
The Spring Festival is coming．I'm going to Beijing．I hear it is really a great place to relax．I'm going there by train because it's cheap and safe．My parents are going with me．We are staying there for two weeks．We are visiting some interesting places．For example，the GreatWall and the Summer Palace．Then we are eating some delicious snacks and taking some beautiful photos．I can make more friends during my trip and learn moreabout Chinese culture．I hope we are having fun．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I hear it is really a great place to relax．我聽(tīng)說(shuō)這真是個(gè)放松的好地方．
I hear 后跟了一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，省略了引導(dǎo)詞that；to relax為動(dòng)詞不定式作后置定語(yǔ)，修飾great place．
高分句型二：
I'm going there by train because it's cheap and safe．我要坐火車(chē)去那兒，因?yàn)樗�既便宜又安全�?br />這是because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句；be going to為一般將來(lái)時(shí)的運(yùn)用，此處后跟there為副詞，故省略to；  by train 乘火車(chē)，buy+交通工具作方式狀語(yǔ)．

解答 The Spring Festival is coming．I'm going to Beijing．I hear it is really a great place to relax．【高分句型一】（點(diǎn)明度假的地點(diǎn)）I'm going there by train because it's cheap and safe．【高分句型二】（乘車(chē)的方式）My parents are going with me．（和誰(shuí)一起去）We are staying there for two weeks．（在那呆多長(zhǎng)時(shí)間）We are visiting some interesting places．For example，the Great Wall and the Summer Palace．Then we are eating some delicious snacks and taking some beautiful photos．I can make more friends during my trip and learn more about Chinese culture．（活動(dòng)安排）I hope we are having fun．（表達(dá)希望）

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