Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

根據(jù)提示，以“Liu Tao’s lifestyle”為題，寫一篇詞數(shù)不少于70詞的短文。

提示：1. 劉濤今年12歲，和爺爺奶奶一起住在如皋。

2. 經(jīng)常吃漢堡、雞肉和巧克力，但很少吃蔬菜和水果。

3. 每兩頓飯之間還吃零食，很少運動。

4. 他需要改變他的生活方式。

5. 打算每天跑步20分鐘，每周游泳3次，多吃蔬菜，多喝水，因為水是最好的飲料。

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Liu Tao’s lifestyle

Liu Tao is 12 years old.He lives with his grandparents in Lugao He is a top student in our class, but he is not healthy. He often eats hamburgers, chicken and ice cream. He seldom eats vegetables and fruit. He also eats sweet food between meals. He doesn't like sports. He feels that it's time for him to change his diet and lifestyle. He plans to run for 20 minutes every day and go swimming three times a week. He wants to eat more vegetables and drink much water, because water is the best drink. It has no calories.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹劉濤的生活方式。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：He is ......， He often eats......；及He wants to......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了湯姆不健康的生活方式，接下來介紹具體的飲食和鍛煉情況，最后介紹他要改變生活方式：做運動，多吃蔬菜，多喝水。此處用了 between meals，it's time for him to，plans to，every day 等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。