Question

13．同學(xué)們，初中三年的學(xué)習(xí)生活很快就要結(jié)束了，�？�"英語園地"正在進(jìn)行以"感恩"為主題的征文活動(dòng)，請以"Thank you，____!"為題寫一篇短文，感謝曾經(jīng)幫助過你的老師、同桌或朋友．內(nèi)容須包含以下要點(diǎn)：
•Who and What does he/she look like？
•Why do you want to say thanks to him/her？
•What do you want to say to him/her？
要求：1．詞數(shù)80左右，提示詞僅供參考；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名．
Thank you，____!
How time flies!We're just leaving you--our lovely junior high school．I have so many words from my heart to say．I really want to express thanks to my English teacher，Miss Wang!
She's so smart and fair and friendly．She's got big eyes and long dark hair．I enjoy her each lesson every day．
With her kindness，she gets my attention．Every day she's planting a seed，helping all of us．I still remember the day when I had a low mark in English，I hid away from all my classmates because I was shy and afraid to be laughed at．Miss Wang noticed that and spent her whole afternoon helping with my test questions and my worries．
She's a teacher like spring who encourages and leads us to a bright future．I'll write a poem for her to show all my thanks．I'll let everyone know she's great and I'm grateful to have her as my teacher．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I still remember the day①when I had a low mark in English，I hid away from all my classmates②because I was shy and③afraid to be laughed at．我仍然記得我英語分?jǐn)?shù)低的那天，我將自己藏起來沒因?yàn)槲液π吆ε卤怀靶Γ?br />①when作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句，修飾前面的the day．
②because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句．
③be afraid to do sth 害怕做某事．
【高分句型二】
She's a teacher like spring who encourages and leads us to a bright future．她是一名老師，像春天一樣，鼓勵(lì)我?guī)ьI(lǐng)我走向美好的未來．
who作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句，修飾前面的teacher

解答 Thank You，My Teacher
How time flies!We're just leaving you--our lovely junior high school．I have so many words from my heart to say．I really want to express thanks to my English teacher，Miss Wang!
She's so smart and fair and friendly．She's got big eyes and long dark hair．（形象）I enjoy her each lesson every day．
With her kindness，she gets my attention．Every day she's planting a seed，helping all of us．I still remember the day  when I had a low mark in English，I hid away from all my classmates because I was shy and afraid to be laughed at．【高分句型一】Miss Wang noticed that and spent her whole afternoon helping with my test questions and my worries．（如何幫助我的，為什么要感謝）
She's a teacher like spring who encourages and leads us to a bright future【高分句型二】．I'll write a poem for her to show all my thanks．I'll let everyone know she's great and I'm grateful to have her as my teacher．（如何表示謝意）

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