Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你有一個(gè)最好的朋友叫張華，請以 “My best friend”為題，寫一篇100詞左右的書面表達(dá)�？蛇m當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

年齡	15歲，第一中學(xué)八年級學(xué)生，既是我的鄰居又是我的好友。
外貌	黑色短發(fā)，方臉，明亮而笑瞇瞇的眼睛，英俊。
性格	真誠，樂于助人---- ----
學(xué)習(xí)	尖子生，用功刻苦，所有學(xué)科中最喜歡英語。
愛好	1. 旅行。經(jīng)常和父母進(jìn)行旅行，希望有一天能周游世界。 2. DIY。閱讀了很多有關(guān)DIY的書。會做水果沙拉，三明治。
理想	他喜歡----， 長大后想---- （自由發(fā)揮一句）

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Answer 1

【答案】

My best friend

I have a friend. His name is Zhang Hua. He is not only my neighbor but also my best friend. He studies in No.1 Middle School,he is in Grade 8. He has short black hair and a round face. He has bright and smiling eyes.He is very handsome.He is very honest. He is such a helpful boy that he often gives his seat to others on the bus.He studies very hard and he is one of the top students.His favorite subject is English.He likes trvelling and often tarvels with his parents.He hopes to travel around the world one day.He likes DIY and reads many books about DIY.He can make fruit salad and sandwiches.When he grows up，he wants to be a social worker，listen to the people and help them with their difficulties.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。寫作中注意將所提示內(nèi)容的情況介紹清楚。根據(jù)材料可知，本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱進(jìn)行敘述，寫作中主語時(shí)態(tài)及主謂一致等問題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，做到語句通順。為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文在寫作中使用了很多固定句式，如：help sb with sth幫助某人做某事；such…that…如此……以至于……；not only…but also…不但……而且……；grow up長大等。所以在學(xué)習(xí)中，我們應(yīng)注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.