Question

某英語(yǔ)雜志社舉辦以“科學(xué)飲食，健康生活”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所列的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，以“The healthier, the happier”為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹自己的生活方式，參加比賽。

要求： 1. 詞數(shù)80-100；2. 條理清楚，語(yǔ)義連貫，句式規(guī)范，字跡工整；

       3. 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名﹑校名﹑地名等相關(guān)信息。

以前的生活方式	如今的生活方式	感 悟
內(nèi) 容	對(duì)健康的影響
不吃早飯，吃太多的快餐；看太多的電視，過(guò)多地玩電腦游戲……	飲食	至少兩點(diǎn)	至少一點(diǎn)
睡眠
鍛煉
心理健康（傾訴、放松）

The healthier, the happier

In the past, I                                                                                                                 

                                                                                                                              

But now I                                                                                                              

                                                                                                                            

                                                                                                                           

I think                                                                    

                                                                                                                      

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

“The healthier, the happier”

In the past, I used to eat a lot of junk food, hardly ever do some exercise. So I am very fat, and always get ill.

I began to realize it is important for us to keep healthy.

Now I hardly ever eat junk food. In my free time, I take part in many sports. Thus I became more and more healthy. But do you know the ways to keep us healthy? I think if you do as the following ways. You will be healthy as me.

First, we need to have healthy eating habits, we can eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit, but we’d better eat less meat.

Then, playing sports every day can also help us keep fit. We should try to do more exercise every day.

Happiness is another way to keep healthy. When we are lonely or unhappy, try to make friends, it is a good way to keep us happy. If you smile often, you also feel happy. So, The healthier, the happier.

【解析】

試題分析：

這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一二人稱，一般過(guò)去及現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如:hardly ever幾乎從來(lái)不；It is adj for sb to do sth，對(duì)某人來(lái)，說(shuō)做某事怎么樣；take part in 參加；had better do sth最好做某事等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。

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