Question

【題目】你一定有過(guò)一次難忘的旅游經(jīng)歷，它也一定給你留下了美好的回憶，請(qǐng)以”My Favorite Trip”為題，向你的同學(xué)介紹一下那里的天氣、飲食、風(fēng)景、民俗等，使同學(xué)們以后度假是有更多的選擇。

要求：語(yǔ)句通順，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，60詞左右。

My Favorite Trip

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Answer 1

【答案】My Favorite Trip

My parents and I went to the countryside last Saturday morning. It was sunny.I was very excited. We visited the farm and walked around the countryside in the morning. We fed the animals and my father took the pictures of us. At noon, we had a picnic on the ground near the river. So my mother cooked some food, like sandwiches,hamburgers and salad before we came here . After that we played some games on the ground. But people here like rice.Then we went fishing. I enjoyed fishing!

I will never forget this exciting trip. I hope that we will have a good time.

【解析】試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)以“My Favorite Trip”為題，結(jié)合本題所給的寫(xiě)作信息，闡述自己一次難忘的旅游經(jīng)歷。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文應(yīng)運(yùn)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意連詞、固定短語(yǔ)的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語(yǔ)句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出自己的感想和看法。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。文中 last Saturday morning，walked around， at noon， had a picnic，after that , and，so, then等詞（組）恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文章的最后I hope that we will have a good time.表達(dá)了自己愿望與想法，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。