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2．南丁格爾是一個心地善良、樂于助人的人，她終生奉獻于護士事業(yè)，為紀念她，人們把她的生日5月12日定為世界護士日（International Nurses Day），請你依據下面的信息，寫一篇短文簡要介紹她的生平．
要求：1．文章字數在80-100詞之間，可根據要點作適當發(fā)揮．
2．文章中不得出現真實的姓名和學校等信息．

1820	be born，in a rich family
1851	be trained
During the war	save soldiers'lives，the front hospitals
After the war	become a national hero，open the world's first nurse school
1910	die
1974	become，International Nurses Day

A famous British nurse-Florence Nightingale
Florence Nightingale was a famous British nurse．She was born in a rich family on May 12，1820．She was kind-hearted and always ready to help others，especially the sick．In 1851，she was trained as a nurse．During the war，she went to help in the front hospitals and saved many soldiers'lives．When she came back after the war，she became a national hero．Later，Florence Nightingale opened the world's first nurse school．Florence Nightingale died in London in 1910．In 1974，her birthday became International Nurses Day because of the great love and help she gave to people．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內容是簡要介紹南丁格爾的生平．時態(tài)主要為一般過去時．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1.1820年出生于一個富裕的家庭
2.1851年接受培訓
3．戰(zhàn)爭期間：拯救戰(zhàn)士的生命，在前線醫(yī)院
4．戰(zhàn)爭后：成為國際英雄，開辦了世界上第一所護士學校
5.1910年去世
6.1974．她的生日定為世界護士日
常用到的重點短語：
be born 出生
come back 返回
be ready to do sth 樂于做某事
because of 因為
【高分句型】
1．In 1851，she was trained as a nurse．
一般過去時的被動語態(tài)，was/were+過去分詞．
2．When she came back after the war，she became a national hero．
when引導的時間狀語從句．
3．In 1974，her birthday became International Nurses Day ①because of the great love and help ②she gave to people．
①because of 因為，由于，of是介詞，后加名詞代詞或動名詞．
②省略了關系詞which的定語從句，修飾先行詞love and help，which作為賓語故省略．

解答 A famous British nurse-Florence Nightingale
Florence Nightingale was a famous British nurse．She was born in a rich family on May 12，1820．（出生日和家庭）She was kind-hearted and always ready to help others，especially the sick．In 1851，she was trained as a nurse．【高分句型】（訓練）During the war，she went to help in the front hospitals and saved many soldiers'lives．（戰(zhàn)爭期間拯救戰(zhàn)士生命）When she came back after the war，she became a national hero．【高分句型】Later，Florence Nightingale opened the world's first nurse school．（戰(zhàn)爭后成為英雄開辦學校）Florence Nightingale died in London in 1910．（去世）In 1974，her birthday became International Nurses Day because of the great love and help she gave to people．【高分句型】（世界護士日）

點評 圖表類作文寫作之前考生首先要認真審題，確定文章的中心．表格內容要全部包括在作文中，詞數要符合要求．句式表達要正確，注意句子的主謂賓、主系表等結構．文章結構要清晰．考生在平時的英語學習中需牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理，也可為文章增色不少