Question

【題目】“城市是我家，環(huán)境衛(wèi)生靠大家。”為響應(yīng)我市全面創(chuàng)建國(guó)家衛(wèi)生城市的號(hào)召，某校開展了以“綠色港城，健康生活”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你針對(duì)環(huán)保問題，結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀銥榄h(huán)境保護(hù)都做了哪些貢獻(xiàn)。

要求：1.詞數(shù)不少于80詞；

2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。

Answer 1

【答案】As civilized citizens, it’s our duty to build a green city so that we can live a healthy life. In my opinion, we can reduce pollution in many ways.

Last year, I saw a report which said the emission of cars was a great cause of air pollution, so I decided to go to school by bike or on foot instead of by car. What’s more, I tried to persuade my parents to go to work by bus. To our surprise, we not only saved a lot of money but also became stronger.

Of course, there are many other things we can do. For example, we can save water by taking shorter showers. Besides, we can save energy by turning off the lights when we leave the room. Additionally, it’s better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin. In a word, everyone can do something to make a difference to our environment.

【解析】

本文屬于給出一個(gè)主題，對(duì)這個(gè)主題的相關(guān)內(nèi)容進(jìn)行論述。實(shí)際上就是要求書寫一份倡議書。人稱為第一人稱。描述自己的經(jīng)歷，為環(huán)境保護(hù)都做了哪些貢獻(xiàn)時(shí)要用到一般過去時(shí)態(tài)。動(dòng)筆前先要注意認(rèn)真閱讀材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容；文章必須包括要點(diǎn)中所給的信息，并補(bǔ)充兩條個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)。注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使行文連貫，豐富文章的文采。