Question

【題目】書面表達(dá) （15分）

以Wang Li’s Birthday 為題寫一篇短文，字?jǐn)?shù)70左右。

要求：1.王立的生日在中秋節(jié)，他收到了朋友及父母的禮物；

2.王立做了兩個燈籠（lantern）, 爸爸幫助掛了起來（hang up）,媽媽為他準(zhǔn)備了月餅和生日蛋糕；

3.晚上他和家人一起在戶外賞月；

4.那天他過的很高興。

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Wang Li’s Birthday

Wang Li’s birthday is on the Mid-autumn festival. On this day, he received a lot of gifts from his parents and friends.Wang Li made two lanterns, and his father helped him to hang them up. His mother prepared moon cakes and birthday cakes for him. In the evening, he went outdoors to enjoy the moon and ate the birthday cakes with his family. That day he had a good time.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給提綱作文，介紹王立的生日。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過去時，人稱為單數(shù)第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Wang Li’s birthday is...,Wang Li made ...，His mother prepared ...，he went outdoors to ...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，完整地表達(dá)出提綱中的內(nèi)容。

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了王立的生日在中秋節(jié)，接下來介紹王立收到的禮物和所做的事情，最后表達(dá)王立在這一天玩得很高興。此處a lot of, hang sth up, prepare sth for sb, go outdoors, have a good time等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。