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【題目】在廣州，越來越多學(xué)生騎共享單車（the shared bikes）上學(xué)。如今共享單車到處都有。它給我們的出行帶來了很多便利，但也帶來了一些問題。請你根據(jù)以下提示給學(xué)校英文報(bào)社寫一篇英文報(bào)道，談?wù)勀銓�共享單車的看法�?/span>

優(yōu)勢	●使用方便，用手機(jī)即可解鎖； ●便宜，半小時(shí)只需0.5元；
不良現(xiàn)象	●隨處亂停； ●有人偷車/破壞車；
你的觀點(diǎn)	？（至少一個(gè)理由）

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注意：1.詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）；

2.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評分。

注：1.隨處亂停 park…disorderly?? 2.解鎖 unlock

In Guangzhou, more and more students begin to ride shared bikes to school. We can see those bikes everywhere.

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Answer 1

【答案】In Guangzhou, more and more students begin to ride the shared bikes to school. We can see those bikes everywhere. Surely, they bring us a lot of convenience while a lot of problems take place at the same time as well.

Students like them because of the following reasons. First, it’s very convenient to use the shared bikes. They can unlock the shared bikes by simply using their phones. Second, it’s cheap to rent the shared bikes. It only costs 0.5 yuan for half an hour.

However, there are some problems as well. Some people park the bikes disorderly. Some people break the bikes on purpose or even steal the bikes.

In my opinion, people should learn how to use the shared bikes properly so that it can make our life easier and our city better.

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