Question

6．請你用英文描述你覺得過去發(fā)生的最有意思的一次經歷，比如旅行、參觀動物園、周末活動等等．開頭已給出．（要求詞數60以上．）必須包含以下要點：
1．你和誰去的？
2．乘坐了什么交通工具？
3．你們具體看了或做了些什么？
4．最后感覺如何？

Last week，I went tothe beach with my father．We set out early in the morning．Wewent there by car．Our destination：Dalian．I've always been to the beach．My childhood memories were those that were spent at the beach．Upon reaching Dalian，we saw many ships lay on the bank．When I gazed out to the open sea，I could see the edge of the sea meeting the edge of the sky．It was a fantastic feeling．The blue waters are really truly beautiful．I could sense serenity all around me．I'll never forget this day in my life．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：My childhood memories were those that were spent at the beach．我童年的回憶是那些在海灘上度過的回憶．that引導的定語從句．
句型二：When I gazed out to the open sea，I could see the edge of the sea meeting the edge of the sky當我凝視著開闊的海面時，我能看見大海的邊緣．when引導的時態(tài)狀語從句．

解答 Last week，I went to the beach  with my father．（直接引出主題做什么了）We set out early in the morning．We went there by car．Our destination：Dalian．I've always been to the beach．My childhood memories were those that were spent at the beach．【高分句型一】Upon reaching Dalian，we saw many ships lay on the bank．When I gazed out to the open sea，I could see the edge of the sea meeting the edge of the sky．【高分句型二】It was a fantastic feeling．The blue waters are really truly beautiful．I could sense serenity all around me．I'll never forget this day in my life．（感覺如何？）

點評 在寫作時需要明確寫作要點，注意寫作中人稱和時態(tài)的使用，做到思路清晰，句式靈活，表達流暢，所以平時應多注意常考的作文形式，積累相關的短語和詞匯．