Question

9．在初中的三年里，你參加過(guò)各種不同形式的社團(tuán)活動(dòng)．有的活動(dòng)給你留下了深刻的印象．請(qǐng)你以"           leaves me a deep impression"為標(biāo)題，寫一篇文章，描述你印象最深刻的一次活動(dòng)以及你的收獲．
要求：
1．語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫通順．標(biāo)題中橫線上需填上相應(yīng)的活動(dòng)名稱．
2．詞數(shù)80詞左右，文中不能出現(xiàn)能透露考生真實(shí)身份的任何信息．
         leaves me a deep impression
                  ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
With his help，I fixed one and succeeded in flying．
with one's help 在某人的幫助下；succeed in doing sth 成功做某事．這句話意為：在他的幫助下，我安裝好了一個(gè)，并成功放飛．
高分句型二：
By making model planes I learn that no matter what I do，I must keep doing it even though it fails again and again．
no matter  無(wú)論； keep doing sth 一直做某事；even though 即使．這句話意為：通過(guò)制作飛機(jī)模型我認(rèn)識(shí)到，無(wú)論做什么，我必須一直努力，即使一次又一次地失�。�

解答 Making model planes  leaves me a deep impression
      I have taken part in many outdoor activities during the past three years．Some of them have left me deep impression，especially making plane models．（開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題）
      One day，Mr．Ma told us to Room 202 to make model planes．After class，I went there and took the parts of a model plane to fix it．Soon I made one，unluckily it couldn't fly．I was a little worried and tried another time，it failed again，I was very sad．Just at that time，a student came to me and told me the skills of fixing．With his help，I fixed one and succeeded in flying．【高分句型一】（描述事件）
     By making model planes I learn that no matter what I do，I must keep doing it even though it fails again and again．【高分句型二】Besides it is important for members to help each other．（我的收獲）

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