Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

你妹妹的生日就要到了，你和父母一起去商場(chǎng)為她挑選禮物。根據(jù)表格提示，寫一篇70詞左右的短文�？蛇m當(dāng)發(fā)揮,開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。(用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)表達(dá)即可)

人物	禮物	原因
爸爸	李健的CD	……
媽媽	玩具熊	……
我	書	……

My sister’s birthday is coming._____________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】My sister’s birthday is coming. My parents and I go to the shop to choose some presents for her. My sister likes music and she always listens to songs by her favorite singer, Li Jian. So my father chooses a CD by Li Jian. My mother buys a toy bear because my sister loves animals, and the bear is her favorite. She enjoys reading, so I choose a book for her. I think she must be happy when she gets our presents.

【解析】

這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如be coming，go to the shop，listens to songs，enjoy doing，must be等。而并列句My sister likes music and she always listens to songs by her favorite singer, Li Jian.和My mother buys a toy bear because my sister loves animals, and the bear is her favorite. /She enjoys reading, so I choose a book for her. /I think she must be happy when she gets our presents.等多種從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。