Question

【題目】請(qǐng)以My hobby為題寫一篇英語(yǔ)作文，供英語(yǔ)課上交流。

1. What is your hobby?

2. When and how did you become interested in this hobby?

3. Why do you enjoy your hobby?

4. How does your hobby influence you?

寫作要求：

1.根據(jù)所提供的問(wèn)題，適當(dāng)拓展想象空間，靈活地將提供的信息體現(xiàn)在文章中。

2.條理清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，書寫清晰、規(guī)范。(詞數(shù)80左右)

My hobby

Answer 1

【答案】

My hobby

Everyone has his own hobby , it may give him a lot of happiness. My hobby is reading.

Two years ago, I didn't like reading very much. I had plenty of time, but I spent lots of time on playing with computers. When I was very young, I didn't think reading book was interesting, because I found nothing more interesting than the computer games.

I've changed now. I enjoy reading novels, because there're lots of interesting stories. When I am in trouble, reading can make me calm down. When I am very tired, it can make me comfortable. When I am angry with something, it also can make me happy again. Reading keeps me in a good mood and it's good for my health.

Enjoy your hobby, enjoy your life.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式的給材料作文。要求介紹你的愛好是什么，什么時(shí)間和怎樣產(chǎn)生這一愛好的，為什么你喜歡你的愛好，你的愛好怎樣影響了你。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文條理清晰語(yǔ)句通順。不僅注意避免句式重復(fù)而且使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。.如 but I spent lots of time on playing with computers，When I was very young,，because I found nothing more interesting than the computer games. ，make me calm down. 等，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。