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5．近幾年，越來越多的中國人出國旅游，他們中的一些不文明行為引起了人們的極大關(guān)注．調(diào)查顯示，中國游客列世界第二不受歡迎的人．為此，請你根據(jù)以下要點，給校報英語專欄寫一篇短文，并提出你的建議，呼吁人們文明出行．
1．不高聲喧嘩；
2．排隊候車或就餐；
3．不隨地吐痰或亂扔垃圾；
4．不亂涂亂畫．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：80 詞左右；開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2．應(yīng)覆蓋所有要點；可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫；
3．參考詞匯：spit v．吐痰；behavior n．行為．
With more and more Chinese people traveling abroad，their bad behaviors have become a hot topic．A recent US survey showed Chinese were the second worst tourists．How can we be a good tourist？Here are some tips for you．First，we should keep our voice down while talking with friends in public places．Please wait in line if you want to take a bus or have dinner．Also，don't spit or drop litter whenever you want．Finally，it's really bad behavior to write or draw pictures on famous buildings．As a middle school student，I think we should pay attention to our behavior，saying no to those bad habits．While enjoying ourselves，we should not only respect local customs，but also take care of the environment．．

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分析 根據(jù)提示要點，可以知道，這是要求寫一篇議論文，談?wù)撘幌履壳氨容^突出的一種現(xiàn)象，因為是辨析現(xiàn)實，所以寫作時用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)就可以，這篇作文我們要從以下幾個要點入手寫作：1．不文明現(xiàn)象的出現(xiàn)（已經(jīng)給出）．2．應(yīng)該如何文明出行（4條）3．提出期望或呼吁．

解答 With more and more Chinese people traveling abroad，their bad behaviors have become a hot topic．A recent US survey showed Chinese were the second worst tourists．How can we be a good tourist？Here are some tips for you．First，we should keep our voice down while talking with friends in public places．Please wait in line if you want to take a bus or have dinner．Also，don't spit or drop litter whenever you want．Finally，it's really bad behavior to write or draw pictures on famous buildings．As a middle school student，I think we should pay attention to our behavior，saying no to those bad habits．While enjoying ourselves，we should not only respect local customs，but also take care of the environment．

點評 以提綱提供情景的作文．要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個提綱的要點．行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句．在作文完成的時候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達清楚的要點和細節(jié)．