Question

10．假如你是李華，你們學校正就"感恩父母，從我做起"這一話題開展大討論．請你用英語寫一篇短文給某英文網(wǎng)站投稿，談談為什么要感恩父母，你通常在業(yè)余時間幫父母做什么，以及你這樣做的感受．
提示詞語：think，bring up，work，make money，support，housework，cook，clean，wash，happy，
proud
提示問題：●Why is it important for you to thank parents？
●What do you usually do for them in your spare time？
●How do you feel？
At my school，we are talking about what we can do to thank parents．                          
提示詞語：hold，activity，get together，sing，eat，game，gift，wish
提示問題：●When and where are you going to celebrate XiaoMing's birthday？
●What are you going to do at the party？
●What do you advise Peter to prepare for Xiao Ming's birthday？

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
They①not only work hard ②to make money but also look after us carefully．
①not only…but also…不僅…而且…
②動詞不定式做目的狀語．
【高分句型二】
My parents ①are proud of me②because I can③make them feel relaxed．
①be proud of：以…為驕傲
②because引導的原因狀語從句．
③make sb do sth讓某人做某事．

解答 At my school，we are talking about what we can do to thank parents．My classmates and I think we should do something for them．Because they bring us up．They not only work hard to make money but also look after us carefully．【高分句型一】（為什么要感恩父母）
To thank my parents，I always take some actions．First of all，I usually help my parents do some housework in my spare time．For example：help them clean the floor，wash the dishes on weekends and help them cook breakfast and so on．（在業(yè)余時間幫父母做什么）
My parents are proud of me because I can make them feel relaxed．【高分句型二】I feel very happy too．（感受）

點評 以提綱提供情景的作文．要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個提綱的要點．行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句．在作文完成的時候，應該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達清楚的要點和細節(jié)．寫作時，要注意謂語動詞形式的變化．另外，還需要使用一些句型和短語，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達流暢．