生活中到處都有規(guī)則,所謂國有國法家有家規(guī), 每所學校都有嚴格的校規(guī),每個家庭也都有嚴格的家規(guī),請你以“My … rules”為題,寫一篇120詞左右的英語短文介紹你熟知的規(guī)章制度(至少3條),并發(fā)表你的看法。
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My Family Rules
My parents are very strict.Because I have so many family rules. For example,I can't go out with my friends at school nights.On weekends, I have to go home before nine p.m. It's strict, but I? think it's necessary. And I must finish my homework in time. I can't play computer games. I have to wash clothes by myself. I have to get up at six o'clock every morning.And I? have to be in bed by ten o'clock. Thanks to these rules,I can live healthily.But i think to be in bed by ten o'clock is unfair! Students need nine hours sleep! And I? think play some computer games is not badly. So I think the family rules can make some change.
【解析】
試題分析:這是一篇提綱作文。本文作者先寫自己的個人情況,包括所在學校、星座、性格、愛好,然后寫自己的煩惱,最后請求幫助。全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少,例如For example, go out,at school nights,On weekends,have to,go home,in time, wash clothes,by myself,get up,in bed,Thanks to等短語;文中還用到了賓語從句 it's necessary,to be in bed by ten o'clock is unfair,play some computer games is not badly;不定式做主語to be in bed。文章層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達流暢。
考點:提綱作文。
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