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8．假如你是陽(yáng)光中學(xué)的李磊，你在學(xué)校網(wǎng)站看到國(guó)際學(xué)生Stephen的求助信．請(qǐng)根據(jù)Stephen信的內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)給Stephen寫(xiě)一封回信，介紹你校圖書(shū)館借書(shū)的要求和流程．

HELP NEEDED I'm Stephen，an intemational student from Britain．I would like to know how to borrow books from the school library．Should I bring my student's card with me？How long can I keep a book？I wonder if you can provide any tips on borrowing books． Please email me at Stephen HYPERLINK"mailto：220@yahoo．com．Thank"220@yahoo．com．Thank you． Stephen

注意：
1．文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
2．語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；
3．詞數(shù)80左右，郵件的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Stephen，
I am writing to tell you how to borrow books from the school library．Remember to go to the library with your student's card．When you enter the library，first show your student's card to a librarian．Then you can choose books you want．At last you can take the books away after you show them to a librarian．You can only borrow 3 books at a time and keep them for a month．You will have to go back to the library to renew the books if you want to keep them longer．Please email me if you have any other questions．
Yours faithfully，Li Lei

Yours faithfully．
Li Lei．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封信，需要回答來(lái)信中的問(wèn)題，怎么借書(shū)，需不需要帶學(xué)生證，書(shū)可以借多久以及借書(shū)的步驟，寫(xiě)作時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要為第二人稱(chēng)，句子要通順連貫，沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤．動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語(yǔ)，句式等問(wèn)題．
高分句型分析：
1．When you enter the library，first show your student's card to a librarian．當(dāng)你進(jìn)入圖書(shū)館時(shí)，首先你得把學(xué)生證給圖書(shū)管理員看看．
這是when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，當(dāng)…時(shí)候，show sth．to sb．把某物給某人看．
2．You will have to go back to the library to renew the books if you want to keep them longer．如果你想保持更長(zhǎng)的時(shí)間，你將不得不回到圖書(shū)館去更新這些書(shū)．
這是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主句用一般將來(lái)時(shí)，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．

解答 Dear Stephen，
I am writing to tell you how to borrow books from the school library【第一句，點(diǎn)明主題】．Remember to go to the library with your student's card．When you enter the library，first show your student's card to a librarian【高分句型一，when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句】．Then you can choose books you want．At last you can take the books away after you show them to a librarian．【借書(shū)步驟】． You can only borrow 3 books at a time and keep them for a month．You will have to go back to the library to renew the books if you want to keep them longer【高分句型二，if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句】【借書(shū)時(shí)間】． Please email me if you have any other questions． 
Yours faithfully，
Li Lei

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫(xiě)作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，多閱讀此類(lèi)題材，將詞匯歸類(lèi)整理；動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫(xiě)出關(guān)鍵單詞．寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．