Question

【題目】（題文）根據(jù)所給圖畫，用英語寫一篇約80詞的短文。要求完整敘述圖畫內(nèi)容，描述一下Mr. and Ms. Green家里發(fā)生了什么。

參考詞匯：burglar n. 竊賊 steal (stole, stolen) v. 偷

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Answer 1

【答案】【參考范文】

One night, Mr. and Ms. Green were sleeping. So was their cat. The cat dreamed of a fish. At that moment, a burglar came into their room quietly from the window. He wanted to steal something from their house. The cat woke up. He fought with the burglar bravely. Being afraid to wake up the Greens, the burglar had to escape from the window again. The brave cat protected the things from being stolen without waking up its owner.

【解析】試題分析：1）弄清圖畫內(nèi)容，把握情節(jié)線索，根據(jù)圖畫在腦海中串聯(lián)出完整的故事，注意圖畫中的細(xì)節(jié)。

（2）結(jié)合提示詞，明確考查意圖。根據(jù)提示，選擇正確的時(shí)態(tài)，運(yùn)用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，運(yùn)用所給或所學(xué)的詞語，盡量運(yùn)用熟悉的句型，作適當(dāng)展開，聯(lián)想，就能比較完整地表達(dá)出畫面的意思了。

（3）切忌堆砌詞語，句子，注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢，連貫。

（4）注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。

（5）注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫，語法，動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)，語序，主謂一致，句子的語序和表達(dá)是否符合英文習(xí)慣等，盡量減少錯(cuò)誤。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文。時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)完整、應(yīng)用詞匯靈活準(zhǔn)確，句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚，上下文連貫，字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。