Question

假如你叫王玲玲，下表是你的家庭情況，請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇家庭的自我介紹，要求有所拓展，字?jǐn)?shù)不少于50。

	Wang Ling ling	Mr Wang	Mrs Wang	Wang Fang
Age	13	38	36	7
Job	student	manager	nurse
Place	at  school	hotel	hospital

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

My name is Wang Lingling. I’m 13. And I am a student at school. My father is Mr Wang. He is 38. And he is a manager at a hotel. Mrs Wang is my mother and she is 36. She is a nurse at a hospital. My sister is Wang Fang and she is 7. I love my family members. We are very happy.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，介紹個(gè)人情況及家庭成員。本題給出的材料較為詳細(xì)。動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配問(wèn)題，然后組織成文。注意敘述的條理性，適當(dāng)使用連接詞。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式，在敘述中使用連接詞，使敘述邏輯更為合理，層次更加分明，為文章增色不少.如: at school 在學(xué)校，等,學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱作文。