Question

2．現(xiàn)在很多學(xué)生不能好好管理時(shí)間，以致影響了學(xué)習(xí)，請你就此寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />內(nèi)容包括：
1．你或你的同學(xué)一次未能按時(shí)完成學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)的經(jīng)歷，任務(wù)內(nèi)容拖延的原因及后果．
2．對如何管理好時(shí)間提出兩點(diǎn)建議．
作文要求：
1．不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名．
2．語句連貫詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，作文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，也不必抄寫在答題卡上了．
Nowadays，many students can't make good use of their time and this has a bad influence on their study．
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I thought there was no need to finish my homework in a hurry．
"there was no need to finish my homework in a hurry．"在句中為賓語從句．"in a hurry"意為：匆忙，慌忙．其中此句還涉及到一個(gè)句型"there is no need to do sth 沒必要做某事．"這句話意為：我認(rèn)為沒有必要急著完成作業(yè)．
高分句型二：
I spent most of my time playing games and going to travel．
這句話涉及到了spend的用法：sb spend+時(shí)間/金錢+（in） doing sth 某人花費(fèi)時(shí)間/金錢做某事．這句話意為：我把大部分的時(shí)間都用在了打游戲和旅游上．

解答 Nowadays，many students can't make good use of their time and this has a bad influence on their study．
For example，we had a two-month holiday this summer．Our teachers asked us to do some homework during the holiday．I thought there was no need to finish my homework in a hurry．【高分句型一】I spent most of my time playing games and going to travel．【高分句型二】Finally，I found I had forgotten to do my homework．But there wasn't enough time for me．（經(jīng)歷）When I went to school，my teacher was angry with me．（后果）
    Now，I realise that we should learn to manage the time．On the one hand，we should know the importance of valuing the time．There is a saying："Time is money．"But I think time is more important than money．On the other hand，we can make a plan and try to follow it．（建議）

點(diǎn)評 考生在寫作時(shí)要明確寫作要點(diǎn)，注意時(shí)態(tài)的運(yùn)用．寫作中要做到思路清晰，表達(dá)流暢．