Question

1．B．為迎接國(guó)際慈善日（the International Day of Charity）的到來(lái)，某英文報(bào)刊將要舉辦有獎(jiǎng)?wù)魑幕顒?dòng)，請(qǐng)你以 I would like to           for charity 為題寫篇短文 （詞數(shù) 80～100），為本次活動(dòng)投稿．步驟與要點(diǎn)如下：
1．確定主題，并在文中說(shuō)明原因；
2．圍繞主題，進(jìn)行敘述；
3．寫出具體計(jì)劃，也可以講述一段與主題有關(guān)的故事或經(jīng)歷．
要求：
1．補(bǔ)全題目 （參考詞匯：sell old things，hold a book fair，pick up rubbish，organize an activity 等）；
2．字跡工整，內(nèi)容完整連貫，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確規(guī)范；
3．鼓勵(lì)寫出真情實(shí)感，對(duì)緊扣主題的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮不予扣分．短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
4．作文中可以寫出具體計(jì)劃內(nèi)容，也可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，但要注意時(shí)態(tài)的運(yùn)用；如果參照短文中的內(nèi)容，不可以直接引用短文中的句子；
5．作文中不要出現(xiàn)考生和相關(guān)人物的真實(shí)校名和姓名．
I would like togive my love for charity
The International Day of Charity is coming．Many people will do something for it．What should I do？Here are my ideas．
I would like to …give my love for charity．When someone is starving to death，just a little food and water from you may save his life．Again，when a little girl in a poor rural area drops out of school because of poverty，just a small sum of money from you may support her to finish school and change her life．In these case stances you have given love which is like a lamp in a dark place where light is most needed．
We should offer our help to all the needed．We expect to get love from others and we also give love to others．So when you see someone in difficulty or in distress and in need of help，don't hesitate to give your love to him．I believe that the relationship between people will be harmonious and that our society will be a better place for us to live in．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
We should offer our help to all the needed．我們應(yīng)該為所有需要的人提供我們的幫助．
offer one's help to 提供幫助
句型二：
We expect to get love from others and we also give love to others．我們希望得到別人的愛(ài)，我們也給予他人愛(ài)，．
expect to do期望做某事
get…from sb從某人那得到…
 give sth to sb給某人某物

解答 I would like to give my love for charity．
The International Day of Charity is coming．Many people will do something for it．What should I do？Here are my ideas．
I would like to give my love for charity．（主題）When someone is starving to death，just a little food and water from you may save his life．Again，when a little girl in a poor rural area drops out of school because of poverty，just a small sum of money from you may support her to finish school and change her life．In these case stances you have given love which is like a lamp in a dark place where light is most needed．（原因）
We should offer our help to all the needed．【高分句型一】（建議）We expect to get love from others and we also give love to others．【高分句型二】So when you see someone in difficulty or in distress and in need of help，don't hesitate to give your love to him．I believe that the relationship between people will be harmonious and that our society will be a better place for us to live in．（希望）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫作主要考查學(xué)生綜合運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言的能力，涉及學(xué)生的詞匯量，正確運(yùn)用單詞的能力，對(duì)所學(xué)語(yǔ)法的掌握程度，能否按照英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣正確表達(dá)所要表達(dá)的意思的能力等等．