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13．隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的不斷發(fā)展，傳統(tǒng)的學(xué)習(xí)模式收到了沖擊，"網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)（online learning）"這一新的學(xué)習(xí)方式備受青睞．假如你是宋麗，你的學(xué)校校報正準(zhǔn)備就中學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該進(jìn)行網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)舉行一次討論征文，請給校報編輯發(fā)一個電子郵件，發(fā)表一下你對網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)的看法，明確表明你的觀點(diǎn)．
要求：1．說明網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)有優(yōu)點(diǎn)（advantages）也有缺點(diǎn)（disadvantages），如自由選擇學(xué)習(xí)時間，方便，學(xué)習(xí)資源豐富等，網(wǎng)上過多信息浪費(fèi)時間，不良信息有壞影響，過長時間網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)過長時間有你身體健康等等．2．要根據(jù)你的觀點(diǎn)靈活利用優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)做你的論據(jù)，不可簡單逐條翻譯；3．詞數(shù)100單詞左右，郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞語：online learning，learning resource（資源），choose freely，convenient（方便），information，affect（v．影響），waste time，harm．
Dear editor，
Recently，we school are having a discussion about whether students should learn on the internet．                     
Sincerely Yours，
Li Song．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
If they study online，they don't need to spend the time on the road，they just click on the button and then the knowledge is presented．如果他們在網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)，他們不需要花時間在路上，他們只需點(diǎn)擊按鈕，然后就會得到知識．
if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句
need to do sth需要做某事
句型二：
In my opinion，every coin has two sides，that is to say，one is bad，the other one is good．在我看來，上網(wǎng)沒有好壞之分，每一個事物都有兩面，一面是好的，另一面就是不好的．
In my opinion在我看來
one…the other一面…另一面

解答 答案：Dear editor，
Recently，our school are having a discussion about whether students should learn on the internet．
On the one hand，studying online can save people a lot of time．For some people，the school is so far away from their home，it takes a long time to go to school．If they study online，they don't need to spend the time on the road，they just click on the button and then the knowledge is presented．【高分句型一】On the other hand，studying online also saves a lot of money．Without the large spend on the education and the fees on other sides，many families struggle to pay for their children's educational cost．Studying online costs little，even for free．It provides a good way for some people who want to learn knowledge while without enough money．（優(yōu)點(diǎn)）But studying online for a long time will affect your health．（缺點(diǎn)）
In my opinion，every coin has two sides，that is to say，one is bad，the other one is good．【高分句型二】So I think combining the entertainment with the study is the best．（我的觀點(diǎn)）
Sincerely Yours，
Li Song．

點(diǎn)評 寫作主要考查學(xué)生綜合運(yùn)用英語語言的能力，涉及學(xué)生的詞匯量，正確運(yùn)用單詞的能力，對所學(xué)語法的掌握程度，能否按照英語習(xí)慣正確表達(dá)所要表達(dá)的意思的能力等等．