Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如鋼琴家(pianist)李云迪是你的偶像，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以My Hero為題寫一篇短文，90詞左右，短文內(nèi)容必須包含所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

出生年份及地點(diǎn)	1982年，中國(guó)中部	才能	有音樂(lè)天賦；熱愛(ài)天籟之音
學(xué)習(xí)歷程	4歲開始學(xué)習(xí)拉手風(fēng)琴(accordion)； 7歲開始對(duì)鋼琴感興趣，每天苦練； 2001年去德國(guó)繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)；
成就	在全世界舉辦過(guò)許多音樂(lè)會(huì)；許多國(guó)際藝術(shù)節(jié)邀請(qǐng)他彈奏鋼琴； 贏得了全世界的高度贊揚(yáng)
你的愿望	……(至少兩點(diǎn))

My Hero

I am a music fan and the sounds of music are my favorite. Of all the pianists, Li Yundi is my hero. _________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

My hero

I am a music fan and piano music is my favourite. Of all the Chinese pianists, Li Yundi is my hero. He was born in central China in 1982. As a young boy, he could sing some difficult songs. He began to learn to play the accordion at the age of four. When he was seven years old, he showed an interest in playing the piano. Since then, he has practised it hard every day. Sometimes he enjoyed himself in the music world so much that he forgot to have meals. He finished first in several international competitions. He has held lots of concerts around the world.

My dream is to talk with him about his music. I hope it can come true some day.

【解析】試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要注意動(dòng)詞單三形式和過(guò)去式的運(yùn)用。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：文中用到了一些好的句型如：When he was seven years old, he showed an interest in playing the piano；My dream is to talk with him about his music.給文章增色不少。