Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

根據(jù)下面表格內(nèi)容，以The changes to my hometown 為題，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文，介紹你家鄉(xiāng)的變化。題目和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

過去	河水很干凈，空氣很新鮮，沒什么污染；但人們過著貧困的生活；人們?nèi)コ擎?zhèn)主要是騎自行車或步行。
現(xiàn)在	街道既干凈又寬闊；有各種各樣的交通工具，許多人甚至有自己的車；人們過著現(xiàn)代化的生活。但是樹更少了，環(huán)境也沒有以前好了。
將來	希望我的家鄉(xiāng)在將來……

Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the years.

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Answer 1

【答案】

The Changes to My Hometown

Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the years.

In the past, the water was clean and the air was fresh. There was no pollution. It was a wonderful place to live. However, people lived a poor life. They could only went to the town by bike or on foot.

Things have changed a lot. The streets are clean and wide now. There are different kinds of transport. A lot of people even have their own cars. They are living a modern life. But there are fewer trees and the environment is not as good as before.

I hope my hometown will be more and more beautiful in the future and people will live a better life.

【解析】

試題分析：本題是寫一篇給定材料的提綱作文，寫作的話題為“我家鄉(xiāng)的改變”，具體內(nèi)容包括過去和現(xiàn)在人們在交通方式，環(huán)境，生活條件等方面的變化，以及個人對于家鄉(xiāng)未來的期望，在寫作時應(yīng)注意符合題意，同時應(yīng)注意使用多種不同時態(tài)的結(jié)構(gòu)，同時應(yīng)注意寫作時語言的準(zhǔn)確性和連貫性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文第一段總寫：近年來，我的故鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生了巨大的變化；第二段回憶的是過去；第三段是描述的現(xiàn)在；第四段是展望未來。短文要點(diǎn)分明，層次清楚。文中用到了不定式作定語，賓語從句及準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用了大量的短語。使得本文生動具體。短文重點(diǎn)是今昔對比，重點(diǎn)突出，主題鮮明，中心突出。