Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

親子關(guān)系是目前廣受關(guān)注的話題。假設(shè)你是張華，你正在以“如何與父母更好地相處” 為題進(jìn)行英語(yǔ)自主課程研究。通過(guò)搜集資料，你查找到中國(guó)青少年研究中心(CYCRC)近日就中美兩國(guó)親子關(guān)系進(jìn)行了問(wèn)卷調(diào)查，結(jié)果如下表。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表選取并整合你認(rèn)為有用的信息，結(jié)合你的實(shí)際經(jīng)歷以How to get along well with parents為題寫(xiě)一篇感想。

	China	US
Kids often talk to their parents	48.1%	89%
Kids think their parents understand them	61%	81.4%
Kids have different ideas from their parents	82.1%	76%
Kids have different ideas from their parents mostly because of…	Schoolwork (65.4%)	Pocket money (20%)

注意事項(xiàng)：

1.內(nèi)容須根據(jù)表格數(shù)據(jù)和實(shí)際經(jīng)歷合理展開(kāi)；

2.要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫、符合情境；

3.詞數(shù)在90個(gè)左右，首尾已經(jīng)在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

4. 內(nèi)容必須寫(xiě)在答題卡指定的位置。

Answer 1

【答案】How to get along well with parents

More and more people begin to focus on the parent-child relationship. Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents.

CYCRC did a survey in the United States and China. The results showed that 48.1% of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans. More understanding lies in American parent-child relationship. I think we should not only talk often but open our heart. For example, when I got low marks in exams, I always talked to my parents. They helped me find the reason and encouraged me. I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children.

As children, getting well with parents is of great importance to us. We should find a proper way to create a healthy parent-child relationship.

【解析】

這篇作文要求我們以How to get along well with parents為題，就中國(guó)青少年研究中心(CYCRC)近日對(duì)中美兩國(guó)親子關(guān)系問(wèn)卷調(diào)查的結(jié)果進(jìn)行介紹，并結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)歷，發(fā)表自己的感謝。寫(xiě)作前，應(yīng)仔細(xì)審題，觀察所給表格，弄清楚表格中每一項(xiàng)的內(nèi)容以及它的意義。然后結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況，對(duì)如何與父母良好相處，發(fā)表自己的看法。短文應(yīng)主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，第一人稱和第三人稱來(lái)敘述。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：內(nèi)容應(yīng)密切結(jié)合表格中所給的數(shù)據(jù)以及自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)歷，有敘述，有議論。合理安排各部分內(nèi)容之間的關(guān)系，注意分清結(jié)構(gòu)，表達(dá)要有條理。其次應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)式思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句式的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用適當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~、短語(yǔ)和句型表達(dá)。句式結(jié)構(gòu)要完整，可以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式。同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使行文連貫、自然。