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假如你們班要舉辦一次有關(guān)“學(xué)生該不該做家務(wù)”的討論會，請你根據(jù)以下提示的問題寫一篇短文，闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。詞數(shù)：80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

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1. Do you often do chores?

2. What chores do you often do?

3. What do you think of doing chores?

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Answer 1

【答案】

Hello, everyone! Now let me say something about myself. I usually do chores at home. I often sweep the floor, do some washing and clean the rooms. On weekends, I often help my mother do some cooking.

I think we should do some chores at home. Most parents are busy and they are tired after work. So we should try our best to help them. And we can learn a lot from doing chores, too.

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【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。本文主要介紹自己的觀點(diǎn)，因此一般現(xiàn)在時運(yùn)用較多。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。當(dāng)然，寫作時尤要注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)的合理，表述的條理性和準(zhǔn)確性。

溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：該范文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點(diǎn)全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫。尤為突出之處在短語和句子的巧妙運(yùn)用，如do chores；sweep the floor；do some washing；try one’s best to do；On weekends, I often help my mother do some cooking；Most parents are busy and they are tired after work等這些短語和句子的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。