Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。（滿分15分）

以“The life in our ideal school ”為題，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇小短文，80詞左右。

要點(diǎn)：

1、學(xué)校生活豐富多彩而有趣；

2、上午八點(diǎn)半開始，下午四點(diǎn)半結(jié)束；

3、有音樂(lè)、計(jì)算機(jī)等科目；

4、有許多的時(shí)間進(jìn)行課后活動(dòng)，作業(yè)少；

5、學(xué)校每月有旅游活動(dòng)。

要求：1、短文應(yīng)包活要點(diǎn)中所給信息，第4點(diǎn)和第5點(diǎn)可作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2、行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范。

Answer 1

【答案】

The life in our ideal school

My ideal school day will start at 8：30 a.m. because I like sleeping. The school day finishes at 4：30 p.m. We will have more free time to do other things.We have an hour for lunch. There is a big and beautiful dining hall. We can eat tasty meals， chat and have a rest in it. We can listen to pop music while we have lunch. It’s wonderful.We have seven subjects. They are Computer Studies， English， Geography， History， Home Economics， Swimming and Tennis. So we have a swimming pool and a tennis court. We also have many clubs， such as Cooking Lessons， Drama Club， Driving Lessons， Film Club， Reading Club， Singing Group.We wear school uniforms. Girls wear skirts， white blouses， ties and coats. Boys wear black trousers， white shirts， ties and coats.There is a beautiful park and some shops near the school. In the school， there is a big library with lots of books.We don’t have homework every day. But we will do some exercises in class. Every month， we go on a school trip. It’s interesting.

【解析】

試題分析：本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在及將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，注意主謂一致及時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)與時(shí)態(tài)的一致問(wèn)題。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文使用的句式較為簡(jiǎn)單.如： s My ideal school day will start……我理想的學(xué)校會(huì)在……開始；We have an hour for lunch我們有一個(gè)小時(shí)的時(shí)間吃飯等，但是通過(guò)一些連詞，如：so but等的連接，構(gòu)成了一篇布局合理，邏輯清楚的文章，把自己想象中的學(xué)校介紹的明明白白，不失為一篇上等作文。