Question

【題目】

(B)我們都在成長中，請你以How I’ve Changed! 為題，從外貌、性格、愛好等方面來描述你在這些年中的變化，并且具體談?wù)勀阕畲蟮淖兓�是什么，以及帶給你的收獲。

1.條理清晰、語句通順。

2.字?jǐn)?shù)不得少于80詞。

3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名。

Answer 1

【答案】例文

How I’ve changed

My life has changed a lot in the last three years. I used to be short and have long hair, but now I am tall and have short hair. I used to be shy and my face turned red while I was talking to girls, but now I’m not afraid of speaking in public and I am popular in school.

The biggest change in my life is my hobby. I used to play computer games all the time, but now I realize it is a waste of time. I fall in love with books. Books are my friends. They give me knowledge and strength.

I didn’t use to eat vegetables or fruit. Now I’m used to having them. I know they are good for my health.

All in all, I am happy with these changes, because they have brought me the happiness of growth.

【解析】

1.題干解讀：這是一篇命題作文，是以我的改變?yōu)樵掝}的書面表達(dá)，把自己的過去和現(xiàn)在作比較，在個(gè)人的外貌，性格特征和愛好等方面加以比較。介紹過去的個(gè)人情況用一般過去時(shí)，可用used to+動(dòng)詞原形這個(gè)句型，介紹變化后現(xiàn)在的情況用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注重語言結(jié)構(gòu)的通順和流暢，避免使用錯(cuò)誤的單詞、句子和時(shí)態(tài)。