Question

7．畢業(yè)季即將來臨，你校正在舉辦畢業(yè)生英語征文比賽．假如你是唐祎，請根據(jù)以下信息用英語寫一篇短文，回顧你的學習、生活經(jīng)歷，并談談對未來的打算．

注意：1．內(nèi)容必須包括圖中所有信息，可展開思路，適當發(fā)揮；條理清楚、語句連貫；
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實姓名、校名和其他真實信息；
3．詞數(shù)：80詞左右，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
My name is Tangyi．I went to primary school in 2007．I had many hobbies and joined different interest groups in the school．In 2011，I invited many friends to my 10th birthday party．We had a very good time．
In 2013，I entered middle school．I studied many subjects and spent a lot of time on English because it's my favourite．Except for study，I took part in many school activities．I remembered an unforgettable school trip to Xuanwu Lake Park．We had a picnic and played games there，singing and chatting．Besides，I am a member of the Sports Club．I think doing sports can make me healthier．
I hope I can go to my dream school for further study after my graduation．I want to be a doctor in the future．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I studied many subjects and spent a lot of time on English because it's my favourite我學了很多學科花了很多時間學習英語因為是我最喜歡的．
because引導的原因狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
I think doing sports can make me healthier我認為做運動能讓我更健康．
think后是省略that的賓語從句．

解答 My name is Tangyi．I went to primary school in 2007．I had many hobbies and joined different interest groups in the school．In 2011，I invited many friends to my 10th birthday party．We had a very good time．
In 2013，I entered middle school．I studied many subjects and spent a lot of time on English because it's my favourite【高分句型一】．Except for study，I took part in many school activities．I remembered an unforgettable school trip to Xuanwu Lake Park．We had a picnic and played games there，singing and chatting．Besides，I am a member of the Sports Club．I think doing sports can make me healthier．【高分句型二】（學習、生活經(jīng)歷）
I hope I can go to my dream school for further study after my graduation．I want to be a doctor in the future．（未來的打算．）

點評 提綱類作文的要點都給了出來，在寫作的時候需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點連接成一個整體．同時注意使用高級詞匯和句式讓文章更有亮點．