Question

20．隨著全球環(huán)境的惡化，越來(lái)越多的人選擇過(guò)低碳生活．請(qǐng)寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，倡議你的同學(xué)們加入低碳一族．要點(diǎn)如下：
1．節(jié)約用水、用電、用紙；
2．去超市自備購(gòu)物袋；
3．不要購(gòu)買沒(méi)必要的衣服；
4．不要購(gòu)買一次性的杯子和碗筷；
5．步行或騎自行車上學(xué)．
注意：1．詞數(shù)80詞左右．（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)．）
       2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
With the global warming getting worse，more people choose to live a low-carbon life for the purpose of reducing green house gases．As students，
we can choose to live a low-carbon life，too．In our daily life，we should save water，electricity and paper．Remember to turn off the water tap or reuse water．We're supposed to use both sides of the paper．We ought to turn off the lights when we leave a room．We can bring our own shopping bags when we go to the supermarketDon't buy unnecessary clothes because it is a kind of waste．Don't buy cups，bowls or chopsticks which can be used only once．If possible，we'd better go to school on foot or by bike．
Let's take action and be a low-carbon people!．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容為倡議你的同學(xué)們加入低碳一族．時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．其次考生可從五方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：1．節(jié)約用水、用電、用紙；2．去超市自備購(gòu)物袋；3．不要購(gòu)買沒(méi)必要的衣服；4．不要購(gòu)買一次性的杯子和碗筷；5．步行或騎自行車上學(xué)．
常用到的重點(diǎn)句型和短語(yǔ)：remember to do sth記得去做某事，be supposed to應(yīng)該，if possible如果可能的話，had better do sth最好做某事等

解答 答案：
     With the global warming getting worse，more people choose to live a low-carbon life for the purpose of reducing greenhouse gases．As students，we can choose to live a low-carbon life，too．（節(jié)約用水、用電、用紙）In our daily life，we should save water，electricity and paper．Remember to turn off the water tap or reuse water．We're supposed to use both sides of the paper．We ought to turn off the lights when we leave a room．（去超市自備購(gòu)物袋）We can bring our own shopping bags when we go to the supermarket．（不要購(gòu)買沒(méi)必要的衣服）Don't buy unnecessary clothes because it is a kind of waste．（不要購(gòu)買一次性的杯子和碗筷）（高分句型）Don't buy cups，bowls or chopsticks which can be used only once．（步行或騎自行車上學(xué)）If possible，we'd better go to school on foot or by bike．
     （號(hào)召）Let's take action and be a low-carbon people!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫作對(duì)象、范圍、目的、體裁等，命題者的意圖往往較容易領(lǐng)悟，考生在審題上一般不會(huì)出現(xiàn)障礙．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示運(yùn)用相關(guān)的句型結(jié)構(gòu)靈活的展開(kāi)作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進(jìn)行翻譯，所寫句子要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．