分析 A篇為應(yīng)用文寫作,要求寫一張病假條.首先要注意病假條的格式;其次注意審題,要求寫明請假的原因,向誰請假及請假的天數(shù);還要注意署名是李明.人稱為第一人稱,時態(tài)為一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時的結(jié)合.行文中要注意語言要簡潔明了,不要拖泥帶水,把事情講清楚即可.
B篇是一篇話題作文.本文所給內(nèi)容比較詳細(xì),我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些所給的點表達(dá)出來.動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料,不可遺漏要點,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮.根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài);由于是給別人提出建議,給出自己的觀點,所以人稱主要為第二人稱you.注意說話的語氣及主謂一致問題.寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系.
解答 參考范文:
Sick Leave
Dear Miss Gao,
I'm very sorry to tell you that I'm not feeling well today.This morning I went to see a doctor and he told me that I had caught a bad cold.He also advised me to stay in bed for two days.So I can't go to school today and tomorrow.So I have to ask you for two days off.Forgive me and do give me permission.
Thank you.
Yours,
Li Ming
How to Keep Healthy
Health is very important for everybody.Then how can we do to keep healthy?You can try the following tips:
First,you should have healthy life and eating habits.You shouldn't stay up.You should eat more vegetables and fruit.Don't eat junk food.You'd better have meals regularly.Don't drink coffee too much,it's bad for you.
Second,you can play sports.Sports can make you stronger and healthier.You can play baketball with your friends when you are free.You can go to the mouuntains with your family.
Third,Be happy.A happy man lives longer than a sad man.So sing a song or watch a fun movie.You can do anything to mak e you happy.
At last,stay away from smoking and drinking.Smoking and drinking are too bad for men.They can cause terrible illness.
If you do these things,I believe you can be a healthy man.
點評 A篇為應(yīng)用文體作文.要求學(xué)生一定要注意格式不要寫錯.另外注意審題,要明確其要求,并要注意行文的簡潔與流暢.注意應(yīng)用文體在語言風(fēng)格上與其它文體的不同.
B篇為話題作文.在寫作中要注意層次緊湊,開始有總說,最后一段總結(jié),中間分要點分別說明題中給出的要點.用first,second,third,at last顯得層次鮮明,邏輯性很強(qiáng).因為文章是提出建議,所以我們要用許多委婉的表達(dá)來給別人提出建議,如should,You'd better等.注意不要出現(xiàn)語法,詞匯等的錯誤,不要出現(xiàn)漢語式的英語.
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