Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（15分）

假如你叫Alice,是一名八年級的學(xué)生，以前你很少運(yùn)動，因此經(jīng)常生病，醫(yī)生告訴你要多做運(yùn)動，注意飲食習(xí)慣，這樣才能增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)，同時也要呼吁更多的人鍛煉身體，請你以“Sports and Healthy”為題，發(fā)揮聯(lián)想，寫一篇80字左右的短文.(文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的班級和姓名）

Answer 1

【答案】

Sports and Healthy

My name is Alice .I’m a student of Grade 8,I seldom did exercise before, because I had so much homework to do. So I had no time to do sports, I often fall ill, Last week, I had a bad cold ,My mother took me to see a doctor ,The doctor told me that I should do more exercise to build myself up and the healthy eating habits can also keep me healthy , Now I often run in the morning and take a walk after supper ,I feel quiet healthy, I hope more and more people can do more exercise to keep fit.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文要寫的材料比較具體，一是要寫出自己的過去身體狀態(tài)，二是寫出自己現(xiàn)在的情況三是介紹醫(yī)生的建議。我們要做的就是運(yùn)用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。我們要好好選用詞匯和短語，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，和過去時態(tài)。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色.如: because I had so much homework to do，So I had no time to do sports, more and more people，do more exercise等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。