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20．合肥素以"三國舊地、包拯故里"聞名于世．古稱廬州，又名廬陽，歷史悠久，名人輩出，1949年被定為安徽省省會．請根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇作文簡單介紹下合肥．要求：70詞左右，要點齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名校名．
1合肥位于中國東部，是安徽的省會；
2人口約為760萬；
3有很多著名的大學(xué)，例如安徽大學(xué)和中科大；
4城市越來越富裕，道路越來越寬，建筑越來越高．
提示詞匯：中科大University of Science and Technology of China．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
In the past，the roads were so narrow that people went outside only on foot．在過去道路是如此的狹窄，人們只能步行．
句中涉及的結(jié)構(gòu)為"so…that…如此…以致于…"
【高分句型二】
We try to make our hometown an international city．我們努力把家鄉(xiāng)變成國際化城市．
句中涉及的短語有："try to do sth  努力做某事"；"make sb/sth+名詞/形容詞 使…成為…"．

解答 My hometown Hefei is a big city with a long history． It is famous for"the old land of the three countries and the hometown of Baozheng"．There are many famous people and places in Hefei．（介紹合肥文化）
Hefei located in the east of China．It became the capital of  Anhui Province in 1949．It is made up of five districts．The population is about 7.6 million．There are many famous universities such as University of Science and Technology of China．（合肥的地理、人口，教育概況）
Now the city has changed a lot over the years．In the past，the roads were so narrow that people went outside only on foot．【高分句型一】Now we can see wide and clean roads with many trees on both sides．There are many buildings that are taller and taller everywhere．The lives of people are getting better and better．（合肥的變化）
   People here love the natural beauty and we also protect the environment．We try to make our hometown an international city．【高分句型二】Hefei is beautiful in any season，so I think it's a good place to live．（合肥的環(huán)境）

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