Question

17．假如你叫王蒙，班主任Ms．Li 想了解班級(jí)同學(xué)的各方面狀況，以便做考前輔導(dǎo)，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容要求，給班主任老師寫一封信，闡述自己的所遇到的煩惱，并請她給你一些建議．
內(nèi)容要求：（1）學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)重，睡眠不足，缺少體育鍛煉；
（2）父母工作忙，沒時(shí)間陪自己；
（3）性格內(nèi)向，沒有多少朋友，很煩惱．
（4）以書信的格式，字?jǐn)?shù)要求至少80字．

Answer 1

分析 本題是一篇書信格式的應(yīng)用文，應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1．作文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括自己所遇到三項(xiàng)煩惱，每條煩惱可適當(dāng)進(jìn)行擴(kuò)充，并請Ms．Li給你一些建議；2．時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；3．人稱應(yīng)以第一人稱和第二人稱為主；4．作文應(yīng)是書信格式，字?jǐn)?shù)至少是80詞．
寫作常用詞匯句型：
Recently I have met some problems about my study which troubled me a lot．定語從句 最近我學(xué)習(xí)上遇到了一些問題，這困擾了我很久．
give sb．useful adivce 給某人有益的建議
beacuse of 因?yàn)?br />stay up late 熬夜太晚
as a result 結(jié)果
It is even impossibe for me to watch TV or take exercise．看電視或者鍛煉對我來說更是不可能了．
My parents are so busy with work that they always can't spare time to stay with me．我父母忙于工作，以至于他們總是不能抽出時(shí)間來陪我．
deal with處理
look forward to 期待

解答 Dear Ms．Li，
Recently I have met some problems about my study which troubled me a lot，and I really hope you can give me some useful advice．Here are my problems：
Because of heavy homework，I often stay up late．As a result，I don't have enough sleep．It is even impossible for me to watch TV or take exercise．Besides，my parents are so busy with work that they always can't spare（抽出）time to stay with me．As I am not an outgoing boy，there aren't few friends around me，so I always feel lonely and worried．I don't know how to deal with these problems．
So Ms．Li，please give me some advice about my trouble，I am looking forward to your reply．
 Yours
Wang Meng

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇書信格式的應(yīng)用文，應(yīng)仔細(xì)審題，在闡述煩惱時(shí)應(yīng)按照所給提示進(jìn)行依次闡述，并做適當(dāng)?shù)臄U(kuò)充，使內(nèi)容更加具體充實(shí)．其次注意多用亮點(diǎn)的詞匯句型，多變換句型，使文章更生動(dòng)；最后應(yīng)注意時(shí)態(tài)人稱、單詞正確書寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等細(xì)節(jié)問題．