Question

4．以第一人稱的手法按以下提示用英語寫一篇題為"A Happy Trip"的短文．80詞左右，文章開頭已給出．
1）在假期，完成作業(yè)后和好朋友John一起去爬山．
2）好朋友John又高又瘦，留短發(fā)，戴眼鏡，最喜愛旅游．
3）坐公交車去旅游，到達(dá)目的地后開始爬山．
4）山上有美麗的花及動物．
5）吃野餐（have a picnic）并拍照．累但玩得很開心．
A Happy TripOn holidays，after I finished my homework，                                        

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
When we got near the West Mountain by bus，we were very exicited．當(dāng)我們乘坐公交臨近西山的時候，我們很興奮．
when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
Though we were very tired，we were very happy雖然我們很累，但我們很開心．
though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句．

解答 A Happy Trip
On holidays，after I finished my homework，I went to the West Mountian with my good friend named John last Sunday．（在假期，完成作業(yè)后和好朋友John一起去爬山．）John was tall and thin with short hair．He often wore glassess．His favourite is travelling．（好朋友John又高又瘦，留短發(fā)，戴眼鏡，最喜愛旅游．）When we got near the West Mountain by bus，we were very exicited．【高分句型一】We walked to the top of the West Mountain．（坐公交車去旅游，到達(dá)目的地后開始爬山）There were many green trees and animals．（山上有美麗的花及動物．）The air is very fresh on the mountian．At last we reached the top．We had a picnic there and took lots of photos there，too．Then we went home．Though we were very tired，we were very happy．【高分句型二】（吃野餐并拍照．累但玩得很開心．）

點(diǎn)評 本文要求以第一人稱來寫一次去爬山的經(jīng)歷，因?yàn)榕郎桨l(fā)生在過去，所以句子的時態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般過去時，寫作時不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，要注意上下文的銜接．