Question

9．在學(xué)習(xí)有關(guān)環(huán)境保護(hù)的話題后，英語(yǔ)老師讓大家展開(kāi)課堂討論．請(qǐng)你以"What Can We Do for the Environment"為題，寫(xiě)一篇保護(hù)環(huán)境的英語(yǔ)討論稿，為參加討論活動(dòng)做準(zhǔn)備．

行 為	目  的
在購(gòu)物時(shí)用布袋子替代塑料袋	保護(hù)環(huán)境
再利用使用過(guò)的課本	節(jié)約紙張
離開(kāi)教室應(yīng)關(guān)燈	節(jié)約能源
走路或騎自行車(chē)上學(xué)	減少污染

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注意：
l．詞數(shù)：80詞左右．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2．可根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；
3．參考詞匯：布袋子cloth bag
能源energy  課本textbook
What Can We Do for the Environment
Hello，everyone．It's nice to speak about what we can do for the environment．And I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem．                                              
Thank you for your listening!

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
First，we can use cloth bags①instead of plastic bags②when we go shopping首先我們?cè)谫?gòu)物的時(shí)候用布袋而不是塑料袋．
①instead of而不是…，后加名詞代詞或動(dòng)名詞．
②when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．
【高分句型二】
Next，we need to reuse the old textbooks ①as possible as we can ②so that more paper ③can be saved．其次，我們需要盡可能的再利用使用過(guò)的課本，那樣就能節(jié)約紙張．
①as possible as sb can盡可能的
②so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)從句．
③more paper是動(dòng)詞save的承受者，構(gòu)成被動(dòng)關(guān)系，結(jié)合情態(tài)動(dòng)詞can用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)---情態(tài)動(dòng)詞+be+過(guò)去分詞．

解答 What Can We Do for the Environment
Hello，everyone．It's nice to speak about what we can do for the environment．And I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem．
First，we can use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping．【高分句型一】It helps to protect the environment．（在購(gòu)物時(shí)用布袋子替代塑料袋，保護(hù)環(huán)境）Next，we need to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can so that more paper can be saved．【高分句型二】（再利用使用過(guò)的課本，節(jié)約紙張）Also，we should never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy（離開(kāi)教室應(yīng)關(guān)燈，節(jié)約能源）．What's more，it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school．We must try our best to reduce pollution．（走路或騎自行車(chē)上學(xué)，減少污染）
In fact，even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment．I believe we can make the world a better place to live in．
Thank you for your listening!

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