Question

【題目】【來源】【百強校】2016屆北京市海淀區(qū)高三下學期期中練習英語試卷（帶解析）

假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，給校刊“英語園地”寫一

篇短文，介紹上周你與外國朋友Tom 在頤和園的經(jīng)歷。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。

提示詞：毛筆a writing brush

(請務必將作文寫在答題卡指定區(qū)域內(nèi))

Answer 1

【答案】

Last weekend, Tom and I paid a visit to the Summer Palace, which proved to be very interesting and rewarding.

We arrived at the entrance early in the morning and I introduced the history of the park to Tom briefly. The moment we entered the park, Tom was attracted by the beautiful scenery and we walked along the beautiful lake happily. Soon, we noticed an elderly man practicing calligraphy on the ground, with a bucket of water aside. Holding a big writing brush in his hand, he wrote the Chinese character for “l(fā)ongevity”. As well as other tourists, we couldn’t help but admire his skills.

To our surprise, the elderly man invited Tom to have a try. With his help, Tom completed his first calligraphy task, the two Chinese characters for “China”, quite successfully. Before we left, we took a photo together to memorize this valuable experience. In the picture, Tom held the writing brush and the elderly man smiled, with his thumb up.

I was so glad that I could help my foreign friend to learn about the art of the language we have been using for several thousand years. In addition, I rediscovered the charm of Chinese culture.

【解析】

試題分析：考查看圖作文。本文要求一李華的身份，根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容介紹上周你與外國朋友Tom 在頤和園的經(jīng)歷。所以使用第一人稱和一般過去時的時態(tài)。要點：1.上周末和Tom一起去參觀頤和園，這次旅行很有趣也很值得。我們很早就到了入口處，我向Tom介紹了頤和園的歷史。2.進入頤和園以后，我們被美麗的景色吸引，這是一位在地上練字的老人吸引了我們。3.Tom感覺很有趣，老人讓他試一試。4.在老人的幫助下，Tom寫出了中國兩個漢字。我很高興我的朋友Tom能夠?qū)W習書法。

建議文章分成3-4段分別介紹四幅圖的內(nèi)容，各幅圖之間的串聯(lián)承接要自然合理，同時因為本文屬于記敘文，要交代清楚記敘文各要素。