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【題目】假如你叫李華，最近你在班內(nèi)進行了關(guān)于“什么因素影響你對音樂的選擇”的調(diào)查，調(diào)查結(jié)果如圖表所示。現(xiàn)在請你寫一份調(diào)查報告，并針對圖表中的任何一個數(shù)據(jù)所反映的情況談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/span>

Which of the following influences the music that you listen to?

影響因素

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Recently I have carried out a survey among the students in our class. The survey was made to find out what influences the music we listen to.

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently I have carried out a survey among the students in our class. The survey was made to find out what influences the music we listen to.

According to the survey, TV and films have the strongest effect on our choice of music, 50 per cent of the students sharing the opinion. 30 per cent of the students say they are influenced by friends when deciding what to listen to. Radio comes third, with 20 per cent of the students choosing it. Parents seem to have very little influence. Only about 10 per cent of the students say they listen to what their parents recommend.

In my opinion, one of the major reasons why TV and films influence our choice of music so much is that the music in the film usually goes with beautiful pictures, and expresses certain feelings of heroes. Good film music, as is often the case, can be with one for a whole life.

【解析】

該題是圖表文字轉(zhuǎn)換題，要求同學(xué)們分析圖表中的數(shù)據(jù)，對數(shù)據(jù)反映出來的情況進行說明，并分析其原因。人稱宜以第三人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。具體寫作思路如下：

第一步：審題

體裁：說明文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分

第二步：列提綱（重點詞組）

carry out/ find out/ according to/ have an effect on/ listen to/ prefer to/ compare with/ in one’s opinion

第三步：連詞成句

1. Recently a survey was carried out among the students in our class, the aim of which was to find out what influences the music we students listen to.

2. According to the survey, TV and films have the strongest effect on our choice of music, for about 50% students prefer to listen to these kinds of music.

3. 30 percent of the students say they listen to what their friends recommend.

4. Radio comes third, with 20 per cent of the students choosing it.

5. Only about 10 per cent of the students say they listen to what their parents recommend, which shows that parents have little influence on them.

6. In my opinion, one of the major reasons why TV and films are chosen is that the music in the film usually goes with beautiful pictures, and expresses certain feelings of heroes.

7. Good film music, as is often the case, can be with one for a whole life.

第四步：連句成篇（加入銜接詞或從句）

表示并列的連詞：and/but/or/so…

狀語從句連詞：because/ if/ though/ although…

定語從句連詞：which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步：修改潤色（加入高級詞匯或短語）