Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

A motto is a short statement given a rule on how to behave, which can inspire us especially when we faced with difficulties. Many of us have our motto, such as “Where there is a will, there is a way” or “Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it”, and so on. My motto is “God helps those who help them.” Sometimes I am lazy and don’t want to make efforts, but at the moment I think of my motto I will get energetic again and devote myself to that I am doing. I write my motto where I can see it easy. Every time I fail in my exam and begin to lose heart, a sight of my motto inspires me with much confidence. However, my motto also makes me become an independent person.

My friends, unless you don’t have a motto, please choose one because a motto can have a great effect on you.

Answer 1

【答案】

A motto is a short statement a rule on how to behave, which can inspire us especially when we faced with difficulties. Many of us have our , such as “Where there is a will, there is a way” or “Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it”, and so on. My motto is “God helps those who help .” Sometimes I am lazy and don’t want to make efforts, but at the moment I think of my motto I will get energetic again and devote myself to I am doing. I write my motto where I can see it . Every time I fail in my exam and begin to lose heart, sight of my motto inspires me with much confidence. , my motto also makes me become an independent person.

My friends, you don’t have a motto, please choose one because a motto can have a great effect on you.

【解析】

【語篇解讀】本文主要講述座右銘對人的激勵(lì)作用。

第一處：give和statement為主謂關(guān)系，所以用現(xiàn)在分詞作后置定語。故given改為giving。

第二處：sb. be faced with…是固定搭配，指“某人面對……”，主語復(fù)數(shù)形式。故加are。

第三處：此處主語為Many of us，指“我們很多人應(yīng)該有很多座右銘”，所以應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。故motto改為 mottos

第四處：定語從句中主語和賓語一致，所以此處應(yīng)用反身代詞。故them改為themselves。

第五處：此句意應(yīng)為：我一想起我的座右銘，我就會精力充沛。the moment在句中作連詞，引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語 /span>從句。故去掉at。

第六處：據(jù)句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，此處為賓語從句，do為及物動(dòng)詞，缺少賓語，what引導(dǎo)名詞性從句，在從句中 作句子成份。故that改為what。

第七處：句意：我能輕易看到它的地方。修飾動(dòng)詞see，應(yīng)用副詞形式。故easy改為easily。

第八處：固定搭配 the sight of 指“一看見”。故a 改為the。

第九處：跟據(jù)后一句句意：讓我也更加獨(dú)立，可知，此處不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，而是遞進(jìn)關(guān)系。故However改為 Besides/Furthermore/Moreover。

第十處：語境：如果你還沒有座右銘，請選一個(gè)吧，它會對你產(chǎn)生很大的影響。故unless改為if。