Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

My hometown is a beautiful place, which stand next to a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. And in the old days it was poor and backward little town.

Many people had no jobs and they live a hard life. On July, 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have been taken place in it. Factories, schools, hospitals and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is great improved. I love my hometown. All the more I love it’s people.

They are working hardly so as to make it still rich and more beautiful.

Answer 1

【答案】

My hometown is a beautiful place, which stand next to a wide river and

stands

is rich in fish and rice. And in the old days it was /\poor and backward little town.

But a

Many people had no jobs and they live a hard life. On July,1949 my hometown

lived In

was liberated. Since then great changes have been taken place in it. Factories,

schools, hospitals, and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the

people is great improved. I love my hometown. All the more I love it’s people.

greatly its

They are working hardly so as to make it still rich and more beautiful.

hard richer

【1】第一句stand→stands

【2】第二句And---But

【3】在it was和poor之間加a

【4】第三句live→lived

【5】第四句On---In

【6】第五句 把been刪掉

【7】第七句great---greatly

【8】第九句it’s---its

【9】第十句hardly---hard

【10】rich ---richer。

【解析】

【1】第一句stand→stands�？疾橹髦^一致的用法。關系代詞which指代My hometown，是第三人稱單數，故把stand改為stands。

【2】第二句And---But。 考查連詞的用法。第三句敘述的是過去的事，而前面的兩個句子敘述的是現在的事，所以得知前后是轉折關系，故把And改為But。

【3】在it was和poor之間加a，考查冠詞的用法。這里應是它是“一個”小城鎮(zhèn)，故在it was和poor之間加a。

【4】第三句live→lived�？疾閯釉~的時態(tài)。此處表示過去的情況，要用一般過去時，故把live改為lived。

【5】第四句On---In。考查介詞的用法。年月之前用in，故把On 改為In。

【6】第五句 把been刪掉。take place“發(fā)生”為不及物動詞短語，沒有被動語態(tài)，故把been刪掉。

【7】第七句great---greatly。考查副詞的用法。修飾動詞應該用副詞，故把great改為greatly。

【8】第九句it’s---its。考查物主代詞的用法。名詞之前應該用“形容詞性的物主代詞”，it’s是it is 的縮寫，its是形容詞性的物主代詞“它的”，故把it’s改為its。

【9】第十句hardly---hard。 考查副詞的用法。hard的意思“努力地”，hardly的意思是“幾乎不” 努力工作應該是work hard，故把hardly改為hard。

【10】rich ---richer。考查形容詞比較級的用法。and 是并列連詞，前后的比較等級應該一致，句子的意思是努力工作為了使家鄉(xiāng)更富裕更美麗，所以應用比較級，故把rich改為richer。