Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學高三（1）班的學生李華。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，給�？�“英語角”寫一篇英文稿件，記述你在小區(qū)發(fā)現(xiàn)并救助流浪狗的全過程。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。

提示詞：流浪狗 stray dog

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Answer 1

【答案】

One day after school, just before I arrived home, I noticed a puppy beside the community gate. Seeing it shivering in the freezing wind, I felt sympathetic for it and decided to help.

Concerned that it might be sick, I rushed it to the neighborhood vet. On seeing the skinny dog with dirty hair, the vet recognized it as a stray dog. He praised me for my kindness and offered to examine it for free. Fortunately, the dog was fine except for being a little underweight. Since I couldn’t afford the time and energy, the loving vet agreed to keep it until I found it a home.

That night, I posted several pictures of the puppy with a description on a local website, hoping someone would adopt it. To my great surprise, within a few hours my post received hundreds of clicks and dozens of netizens applied to be the owner.

After several telephone “interviews”, a couple became my final choice since they have rich experience in dog raising. We met the next day at the vet’s. For the couple, it was love at first sight. The puppy, as if aware of what was going on, kept on wagging its tail. As I waved the contented family goodbye, I felt a load off my mind and pride in my heart. If everyone can treat animals with love, the world will surely be a nicer place.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是看圖作文，首先仔細閱讀圖畫及文字說明，確定文章體裁，本文是記敘文。第二步是確定人稱，本文根據(jù)要求用第一人稱。第三步是確定時態(tài)，本文用過去時，因事情已經(jīng)發(fā)生。第四步是合理、適度的發(fā)揮聯(lián)想，將文章寫的虛實結(jié)合，詳略得當。

亮點說明：本文是看圖作文，內(nèi)容齊全，語句銜接緊密，同時使用高級句子。just before I arrived home, I noticed a puppy beside the community gate. Before引導時間狀語從句；Seeing it shivering in the freezing wind, I felt sympathetic for it and decided to help. 現(xiàn)在分詞作原因狀語；Since I couldn’t afford the time and energy, the loving vet agreed to keep it until I found it a home. Since引導原因狀語從句和until的時間狀語從句完美結(jié)合；as if aware of what was going on, kept on wagging its tail.用介詞的賓語從句；另外，Concerned that it might be sick, On seeing the skinny dog with dirty hair, Fortunately, To my great surprise,的運用為文章增色添彩。