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My parents always tell me that I should help other when they are in need. And I do which I am told to do. It was Sunday afternoon. Before I was walking to the park, I sudden saw a boy fall off his bike. I hurried to him and helped him up. Since one of his legs were badly hurt, the boy could not stand up for himself. I took him to a nearby hospital at once so that the boy got treat immediately. Then I telephoned his parents and told them about the whole story. They thank me again and again. It was dark and I said goodbye to them. Even though I couldn’t go to the park, but I felt very happy.

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這是一篇記敘文。本文主要講述了一個(gè)星期天下午，我看到一個(gè)男孩從自行車上摔下來(lái)，我?guī)椭�他并把他送到了醫(yī)院，最后得到小男孩父母感謝的故事。

考查代詞。句意：我父母總是告訴我，當(dāng)別人需要幫助時(shí)，我應(yīng)該幫助他們。other意為“其他的”后面應(yīng)跟名詞復(fù)數(shù)。others意為“其他人”。分析句子可知，應(yīng)把other改為others。

考查賓語(yǔ)從句。分析句子可知，what引導(dǎo)了一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，作第二個(gè)動(dòng)詞do的賓語(yǔ)。故把which 改為what。

考查冠詞。句意：那是一個(gè)星期天下午。分析句子可知，a Sunday afternoon意為“一個(gè)星期天下午”，表示泛指。故在Sunday前加a。

考查狀語(yǔ)從句。句意：當(dāng)我走到公園時(shí)，我突然看到一個(gè)男孩從自行車上摔下來(lái)。when表示“當(dāng)……時(shí)候”，且when常和be doing連用，表示“這時(shí)候（突然）”。分析句子可知，應(yīng)是作者在公園時(shí)發(fā)生的故事，而不是之前。故把before改為when。

考查副詞。句意：我突然看到一個(gè)男孩從自行車上摔下來(lái)。分析句子可知，suddenly修飾動(dòng)詞saw。修飾動(dòng)詞用副詞。故把sudden改為suddenly。

考查謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。句意：由于他的一條腿受了重傷，這個(gè)男孩無(wú)法自己站起來(lái)。分析句子可知，此句的主語(yǔ)是one of his legs，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)用第三人稱單數(shù)。故把were改為was。

考查介詞。by oneself固定搭配，意為“靠自己”；for oneself意為“為自己”。分析句子可知，這個(gè)男孩無(wú)法自己站起來(lái)。故把for改為by。

考查名詞。treat是動(dòng)詞，treatment是其名詞形式。分析句子可知，我立刻把他送到附近的醫(yī)院，讓他立刻得到治療。got后應(yīng)跟名詞。故把treat改為treatment。

考查時(shí)態(tài)。分析句子可知，此句是由and并列的兩個(gè)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，故thank應(yīng)跟telephoned的時(shí)態(tài)保持一致。分析文章可知，這是一件發(fā)生在過(guò)去的事。故把thank改為thanked。

考查連詞。分析句子可知，but和even though不可連用。故去掉but。