Question

【題目】Correction 4(2017屆廣東省汕頭市高三二模 )

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào) (∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線 (\) 劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

I always dream life in the future. What will it be like?

Perhaps some people will go to the moon for the holiday, and some people may live under the sea and in pace. Besides, probably there’ll be more educational program on the Internet. And therefore, students will be able to study at home instead of go to school every day. What’s more, maybe in the future each family will have a robot, that will be able to do whatever it was told to, such as going to shopping, doing housework and so on.

With the breakthrough of technology, I believe that their life will certainly become easier, happy and more colorful.

Answer 1

【答案】

I always dream life in the future. What will it be like?

Perhaps some people will go to the moon for holiday, and some people may live under the sea in space. Besides, probably there’ll be more educational on the Internet. And therefore, students will be able to study at home instead of to school every day. What’s more, maybe in the future each family will have a robot, will be able to do whatever it told to, such as going shopping, doing housework and so on.

With the breakthrough of technology, I believe that life will certainly become easier, and more colorful.

【解析】

第一處：dream后加about或of�？疾閯�(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)。dream of/ about…是固定短語(yǔ)，表示＂夢(mèng)想；渴望＂。

第二處：the改為a�？疾楣谠~。此處表示泛指度假，故將the改為a。

第三處：and改為or�？疾檫B詞。under the sea與in the space是選擇關(guān)系，故將and改為or。

第四處：program改為programs。考查名詞。此處program是可數(shù)名詞，表示泛指，應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故將program改為programs。

第五處：go改為going�？疾榉侵^語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。介詞短語(yǔ)instead of后應(yīng)加動(dòng)詞的-ing形式，故將go改為going。

第六處：that改為which�？疾槎ㄕZ(yǔ)從句。關(guān)系代詞that不能引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，故將that改為which。

第七處：was改為is�？疾闀r(shí)態(tài)。含有讓步狀語(yǔ)從句的句子中，主句謂動(dòng)用一般將來(lái)時(shí)，從句謂動(dòng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)表將來(lái)，故將was改為is。

第八處：去掉going后的to�？疾槎陶Z(yǔ)。go shopping是固定短語(yǔ)，表示＂去購(gòu)物＂，故去掉to。

第九處：their改為our。考查代詞。結(jié)合語(yǔ)境，該句應(yīng)表示＂我認(rèn)為我們的生活會(huì)更方便＂，故將their改為our。

第十處：happy改為happier�？疾楸容^級(jí)。happy與easier、more colorful并列，都應(yīng)用比較級(jí)形式，故將happy改為happier。