Question

【題目】短文改錯(共10小題；每小題l分，滿分10分)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Early one morning in April, 2014, it was raining hardly.1 was seating in my classroom by myself. ＂We shall soon leave Beijing and return back to Sichuan. You’ll say goodbye to your new classmates.＂ That my father told me the other day sounded once again on my ears.

Although I had studied at school for only two months, I real loved everything there. What’s more, the teaching conditions here are many better than those in Sichuan. As a child which was born in Sichuan, I knew almost nothing about the world outside. Therefore, after I came to Beijing, I saw so many things I had never seen.

Answer 1

【答案】

Early one morning in April, 2014, it was raining .I was in my classroom by myself.

＂We shall soon leave Beijing and returnto Sichuan. You’ll say goodbye to your new classmates.＂ my father told me the other day sounded once again my ears.

Although I had studied at school for only two months, I loved everything there. What’s more, the teaching conditions here are better than those in Sichuan. As a child was born in Sichuan, I knew almost nothing about the world outside. , after I came to Beijing, I saw so many things l had never seen.

【解析】

【文章大意】文章介紹作者從四川到北京上學(xué)，學(xué)到很多東西，在即將離開北京回家的時候，感到不舍和難過。

第一處：雨下得很大。用hard（副詞：猛力地; 嚴(yán)重地）。hardly幾乎不。故hardly改為hard。

第二處：seat是及物動詞，賓語可以是sb./oneself，seat和sb是動賓關(guān)系。也可以用be seated就坐。sit是不及物動詞，I和sit是主動關(guān)系。故seating改為sitting或seated。

第三處：return＂歸還＂和back含義重復(fù)。故return back 去掉back。

第四處：＂____my father told me＂是主語從句，缺少主語，指物，用what引導(dǎo)主語從句。故That my father中的That改為What。

第五處：爸爸的話在作者的耳朵里面響起。介詞用in。故on my ears中on改為in。

第六處：根據(jù)上下文語境這里特指的是作者在北京的學(xué)校，用定冠詞。故at school改為at the school。

第七處：修飾動詞love用副詞。故real改為really。

第八處：修飾形容詞比較級用副詞much。many不能修飾形容詞比較級。故many 改為much。

第九處：…was born in Sichuan是定語從句，先行詞是a child，指人，而且定語從句缺少主語，用關(guān)系代詞who或that。故which改為who或that。

第十處：上文＂I knew almost nothing about the world outside.＂和下文的＂I saw so many things l had never seen.＂是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。故Therefore 改為However。