Question

某中外合資企業(yè)在一家英文報(bào)上登了一則廣告，招聘一名秘書(shū)。假如你叫李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的簡(jiǎn)歷表用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封求職信。

姓名	李華	性別	女	身高	1.62米
出生年月	1985.5	婚否	未婚	身體狀況	健康
畢業(yè)學(xué)校	上海商學(xué)院
其他：1. 有三年工作經(jīng)歷。      2. 打字快，熟練計(jì)算機(jī)操作。 3. 擅長(zhǎng)英語(yǔ)，懂一些德語(yǔ)。4. 辦事認(rèn)真，待人誠(chéng)懇，與人和睦相處。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120字左右，短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2. 短文需包括表中所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫。

3. 參考詞匯：上海商學(xué)院 Shanghai Commercial College

Dear sir,

I’m writing to apply for the position as a secretary in your company, which I saw advertised in today’s paper. I believe I have the qualifications to fit the job.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir,

I’m writing to apply for the position as a secretary in your company, which I saw advertised in today’s paper. I believe I have the qualifications to fit the job.

Born in May,1985, I’m now 25 years old and unmarried. I’m 1.62 metres tall and in good health. I graduated from Shanghai Commercial College. Now I have had three years of experience as a secretary and am quite familiar with the office work. Not only can I type well, but more important I can use computer skilfully. My English is excellent. In addition, I have some knowledge of the German language. I am always careful in everything I do. As a female, I am kind and easy to get on with.

I’d greatly appreciate the chance to work in your company. Of course, I’ll work hard if I can hold the position. Thank you very much for your kind attention.

I’m eager for your early reply.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：提綱作文要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫(xiě)作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開(kāi)寫(xiě)作。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫(xiě)作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：寫(xiě)好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫(xiě)作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。