分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息上周日你有一次不愉快的就餐經(jīng)歷,對餐廳的服務(wù)員態(tài)度非常不滿意.于是你給該餐廳老板寫一封投訴信,寫作時注意以下幾點:1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個要點:問題:牛肉面有一只蒼蠅,服務(wù)員態(tài)度粗魯;要求:餐廳賠禮道歉.2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài).4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點.
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達:a frequent customer?;be pleased with對…滿意;Out of my expectation出乎意料;in a rude manner 以粗魯?shù)姆绞剑籒eedless to say毋庸置疑;make an apology to向…道歉;
I have been pleased with your excellent service for years,but now I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about the poor service of your waiters.(高分句型一)
When having beef noodles,I suddenly found there was a fly in them,which disgusted me a lot.(高分句型二)
Out of my expectation,he didn't change it but said in a rude manner that he was too busy to solve the problem.Needless to say,such a way of treating customers is unacceptable.(高分句型三)
It is my sincere hope that you can investigate the matter seriously and make a formal apology to me.I am looking forward to a better service next time.(高分句型四)
解答 Dear Sir,
I am Li Hua,a frequent customer in your restaurant.I have been pleased with your excellent service for years,but now I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about the poor service of your waiters.(高分句型一)
Last Saturday,I went to your restaurant to have lunch but I hand a awful experience.When having beef noodles,I suddenly found there was a fly in them,which disgusted me a lot.(高分句型二) So I asked the waiter to change another dish.Out of my expectation,he didn't change it but said in a rude manner that he was too busy to solve the problem.Needless to say,such a way of treating customers is unacceptable.(高分句型三)
It is my sincere hope that you can investigate the matter seriously and make a formal apology to me.I am looking forward to a better service next time.(高分句型四)
Yours,
Li Hua
點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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