Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高一學(xué)生李華。你的英國(guó)筆友Peter來(lái)信詢問你高一學(xué)校生活的情況。請(qǐng)你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.你的學(xué)校生活；

2.你的感受；

3.詢問他的情況。

注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于50；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I’m very pleased to tell you how I get along with my high school as you want to learn about it. It is going really well.

Located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood, my school is an ideal place to get us the all-round development. Apart from the excellent teachers, the public transportation is also convenient. Our school life is busy and exciting. There are many activities in our school that we all enjoy taking part in. I have made many new friends and we often help and learn from each other.

What about you? May your school life be filled with achievements and happiness.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封書信：假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高一學(xué)生李華。你的英國(guó)筆友Peter來(lái)信詢問你高一學(xué)校生活的情況。請(qǐng)你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：1.你的學(xué)校生活；2.你的感受；3.詢問他的情況。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：pleased to tell you（高興地告訴你）；going really well（真的變好）；Located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood（位于一個(gè)美麗而安靜的社區(qū)）；Apart from the excellent teachers（除了一些優(yōu)秀的老師之外）；等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。