Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示，寫(xiě)一篇短文。詞數(shù)不少于50。
You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so

Answer 1

Jim, look at this funny picture. From my perspective, this picture warns us against working blindly. The boy is obviously busy picking apples from a tree. However, he loses most of them from the hole in the basket as he takes no notice of it. In life, we often keep making efforts blindly like the boy in the picture, not knowing how much we actually gain. For example, many students often busy themselves dealing with homework and test papers every day, but forget to check if they have really learned anything. So, I think we should open our eyes and make every bit of our efforts count. Only in this way can we really work effectively and keep the “apples” inside our “basket”. Do you agree, Jim?

解析試題分析：這是一篇看圖寫(xiě)作，做題時(shí)：1. 認(rèn)真讀圖，可知圖畫(huà)體現(xiàn)了學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)程中盲目的問(wèn)題，2. 初步構(gòu)思，考慮用詞、短語(yǔ)、句型和時(shí)態(tài)。3. 連詞成句，然后再連句成文。盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語(yǔ)或句型來(lái)表述具體的內(nèi)容。4. 反復(fù)審核，修改錯(cuò)誤。5. 宜詳則詳，該略則略。對(duì)于一些細(xì)節(jié)方面的內(nèi)容，如果是文章必不可少的，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中是不可將其忽略的。6. 注意所給的漢語(yǔ)提示。一般說(shuō)來(lái)，看圖寫(xiě)話中的漢語(yǔ)提示往往給定了有關(guān)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物等相關(guān)的信息，還有參考詞匯都是有用信息。
考點(diǎn)：看圖寫(xiě)作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個(gè)基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容。還有要注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞語(yǔ)或過(guò)渡性語(yǔ)句，更使上下文更為緊湊、自然。