Question

最近，你班即將舉行以“Life in the future”為主題的英語(yǔ)討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下表格中的要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的文章，談?wù)勀阈哪恐形磥?lái)的生活。

醫(yī)學(xué)	癌癥可被治愈
能源	新能源被開(kāi)發(fā)利用，停止使用石油等燃料
旅行	更方便快捷的交通工具出現(xiàn)，人類可去太空旅行和度假
日常生活	機(jī)器人進(jìn)入百姓家庭，可提供各種服務(wù)

 

With the development of science and technology,____________________________________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Life in the future

         With the development of science and technology, our life in the future will greatly differ from what it is today. It is really interesting to imagine what our life will be like in the future.

         A new cure for cancer is expected to be discovered and fuels such as coal, gas and petrol will not be used with new energy forms being developed. As new means of transportation are invented, it is possible for human beings to travel to outer space and go on holiday on other planets. Besides, robots are popular in our homes and do a lot of housework for us.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于提綱類短文，話題是“Life in the future”，文章的要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出了。寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文，一定要談?wù)勛约旱目捶āＰ枰�注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】：本文中含有一些高級(jí)詞匯，如differ from…不同于…:也有一些高級(jí)的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，with new energy forms being developed.中的with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)。our life in the future will greatly differ from what it is today.中的what it is today的賓語(yǔ)從句。It is really interesting to imagine what our life will be like in the future.中的it作為形式主語(yǔ)。連詞Besides等的使用也很合適

考點(diǎn)：考察提綱類短文